Thursday, 29 November 2012
Finished Product review
To be perfectly honest i am dissapointed with my final product, the weather meant that certain scenes didnt make sense, i personnaly didnt see much in continuity and realise this now, the original soundtrack got omitted due to audio issues. I think this was down to my poor allocation of time on the project, in future i will focus on my organisation as this piece is a reflection on poor timing.
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I've tried to comment on your work a couple of times and lost the post, so I'll keep it brief. Basically, you're right - the work lacks finish and doesn't really demonstrate a huge range of technique. There are way too many long takes and a lack of structure. The sound is poor; you need to consider this in the future. There are some very rough edits and a general sense that the work has been rushed and not really planned out. On the plus side, there is some rather nice work in terms of the use of colour and some of the framing, and there is some invention (for example, the use of the video). Overall, though, you will need to demonstrate a significant improvement when it comes to your final piece.
ReplyDeleteI can chat to you in more detail about this if you want, but I want to make sure this actually posts before I lose it again...